Batch 4, animated: 21 videos for Meta, best first

Last updated Tuesday 20 October 2026, 6:05pm Pacific

These are animated versions of the 21 TikTok slideshows in batch 4, which post on TikTok from 18 to 24 October. The words, numbers and packs move, and each slide still ends on the exact picture and words that were approved. Each video comes in two shapes: 4:5 for Facebook and Instagram feeds, and 9:16 for Instagram and Facebook Reels and Stories.

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What happens next

You and Nick OK each video in the daily brief, not on this page. This page is for watching. Nothing runs on Meta or TikTok until you and Nick OK it, and nothing here is posted anywhere yet.

Music: all 21 videos now also come in a version with music, and the Meta ads will use that version. Each video has its own background track of free stock music from Mixkit, whose free licence allows online ads. The music dips a little each time words appear, and the picture is exactly the same. Each video’s card below names its track; its “With music” buttons play the music version, and the plain “Watch” buttons and the picture still play the silent one.

TikTok ads: all 21 videos also have a TikTok version, with its own music. The video is shown at two-thirds size, up and to the left, over a blurred copy of itself, so TikTok’s like, comment and share buttons and its caption cover none of it. The music is free from Pixabay, whose licence allows ads. The last slide drops the 180-day money-back guarantee, which TikTok doesn’t allow in ads, and says instead: “Annual subscriptions are fully refundable for 30 days after your first delivery.”

Nobody has listened to any of the music yet, Meta or TikTok. The tracks were chosen from their descriptions and timed to the slides by software, so a short listen to each before it runs is worth it.

All 21 have passed their checks.

To watch: tap a picture or a Watch button to open the video on Vimeo. The links are unlisted, so only people with the link can see them.

How the order works: 1 is best, as ranked for Meta ads by our 7-person Meta ads panel. The top 7 are the ones it picked to run first. Codes: the letter is the product (B is BROQ, N is NMN-99, S is SPMD-99, A is all three) and the number is the slideshow's number within batch 4. Small flaws and optional ideas under a video are what the design reviewers noticed. The flaws are too small to hold a video back, and the ideas are changes they'd suggest. None of them is needed; tell us in your brief if you want any done.

One question for you

  1. N5, Three ingredients

    N5 is about NMN-99 having only 3 ingredients. Its last frame, the offer card with "Save 15%", shows two NMN-99 capsules instead of the pack, while the other 20 videos all end on their pack. The capsules match the approved slideshow, whose last slide shows two capsules and no pack. The pack was also left off because it says "1 ingredient" in big type (meaning its one patented ingredient, Uthever), which could look like it contradicts "3 ingredients". Keep the capsules, or show the pack? We'd keep the capsules.

First frame of N4, the opening slide
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Off switch

One of the 7 to run first

Style: Dark charcoal wall, light switch photo, warm beam

Product
NMN-99
Length
26 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Tue 20 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“Wedding Song 03” by Arulo
Music (TikTok version)
“the realization (ambient piano)” by RibhavAgrawal, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • About 14 seconds in, between "get it back" and the trial line ("In a randomized, placebo-controlled trial..."), the light switch and its sunbeam disappear for a moment before a spotlight opens on the pack. Idea: keep the switch photo up until the cut, and let its sunbeam swing up to become that spotlight, so the light that came back is the light on the pack.
  • About 11 seconds in, the light comes back on as a slow fade. Idea: snap it back on in one frame, like the click that turns it off at about 3 seconds, so off and on match.
  • About 15 seconds in, the pack shows dark grey for a split second before the light reaches it. Idea: bring the light up first, so the pack always looks like the white pack people get.
First frame of S1, the opening slide
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Cells eat themselves

One of the 7 to run first

Style: Pastel blue 3D clay illustration

Product
SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
24 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Sun 18 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“Relaxation 02” by Lily J
Music (TikTok version)
“240924 - Enchanted / Whimsical / Fairy-tale / Ancient / Dreamlike” by WELC0MEИ0, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (2)
  • On the last frame, the offer card with "Save 15%", the gears from the earlier slides are simply gone. Idea: have the pack sweep one small gear off screen as it glides in, so it visibly clears the gears away.
  • About 20 seconds in, the pack glides alone for under half a second before "Save 15%" comes up. Idea: bring "Save 15%" in a little sooner.
First frame of B6, the opening slide
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See it in your blood

One of the 7 to run first

Style: Clean clinic white and pale blue, blood tube photo, then a wall calendar

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
27 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Fri 23 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“Break Away” by Ahjay Stelino
Music (TikTok version)
“Over50 relaxed upbeat 011021_01 88rpm beat” by Over50plus, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • Idea: trim it from 27 to about 25 seconds by giving slide 3 a shorter hold. It runs longer than most because slide 3's small print needs time to read.
  • About 1.5 seconds in, the red line under "working?" is already there and just shimmers. Idea: draw it in from left to right, since it's the first thing your eye lands on.
  • Idea: carry one blood tube from the opening rack into the calendar on the next slide (about 3 seconds in), so the blood test and the four months feel like one story.
First frame of B1, the opening slide
4 of 21B1Ready for you and Nick to OK

Running on empty

One of the 7 to run first

Style: Dark car dashboard, fuel gauge, amber/orange needle glow

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
25 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Sun 18 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“It's Now or Never” by Michael Ramir C.
Music (TikTok version)
“The 80s called they want their synths back” by Jim_Combs, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (2)
  • About 18.6 seconds in, the lot number types on letter by letter. Idea: let it arrive whole, as it does on the other videos.
  • About 17.6 seconds in, the pack disappears in a single frame. Idea: fade it out over a few frames.
First frame of N2, the opening slide
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Why so cheap

One of the 7 to run first

Style: Discount-store neon (yellow/pink price stickers), then clean

Product
NMN-99
Length
24 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Sun 18 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“Boulevard” by Arulo
Music (TikTok version)
“Electric Bass and Drum Performance - 95 bpm” by JuliusH, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • In the first half second, the hanging discount sign barely moves. Idea: start it swinging wide, as if someone just knocked it, and let it settle onto the approved picture by about 3 seconds.
  • About 3 to 7 seconds in, idea: shrink the big pink sticker on slide 2 and split it into the 14 small pink dots that land on the cheap bottles, so the sticker visibly lands on each one.
  • About 16 seconds in, our lab-tested NMN amount (1,139.6 mg) just fades on. Idea: slap it on in orange, the same way the pink stickers were slapped on the cheap bottles.
First frame of S3, the opening slide
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Fast or dinner

One of the 7 to run first

Style: Pale blue linen, two top-down plate photos split

Product
SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
24 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Tue 20 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“Acoustical” by Mauro Urbina
Music (TikTok version)
“Morning Garden - Acoustic Chill” by folk_acoustic, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • On the last slide, where the pack lands on the empty plate, the timer keeps ticking after the pack lands. Idea: let the timer hand stop the moment the pack touches the plate, so the fast ends when the product arrives.
  • About 3 seconds in, the opening's two halves (the fasting plate and the dinner) just fade out. Idea: slide the dinner half away and let the fasting half widen into the next slide's empty plate.
  • About 8.5 seconds in, the photo of the plate gives way to a drawn plate. Idea: shrink the photo exactly into the drawn plate, so it reads as one plate.
First frame of A3, the opening slide
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Scoreboard

One of the 7 to run first

Updated Tuesday evening, 20 October, after four new Claude reviewers checked it (two looking for anything a viewer could misread, two watching as first-time customers). What changed:

  • Each scoreboard now shows what the label promises next to what the lab found, so viewers can see a competitor falling short of its own label. Under Opus's lab result: "OUR LABEL 25+ MG" (BROQ), "OUR LABEL 20 MG" (SPMD-99), "OUR LABEL 1,000 MG" (NMN-99). Under the best competitor's result: "THEIR LABEL 50 MG" on BROQ (that brand claims 50 mg; the lab found 16) and "THEIR LABEL 1,000 MG" on NMN-99 (the lab found 905).
  • For SPMD-99, the best competitor tested above its own label, so the video leaves its label off (it wouldn't show a brand falling short).
  • BROQ: "More than double the sulforaphane per serving of 18 of the 20 other brands tested, and 56% more than the best of them." NMN-99: "More than double the NMN per serving of 4 of the 5 top competitors tested, and 26% more than the best of them." Both lines now say "per serving" and end by comparing Opus with the best competitor, the same brand the scoreboard shows. SPMD-99's line already said "per serving" and is unchanged.
  • The lab line now says the competitors were tested too: "An independent 3rd-party lab tested every product, ours and every competitor's. Lab reports state each was received in unopened retail packaging."
  • The price card now shows the saving: "All three: $145.55/mo (20% off) + free shipping". The video doesn't show the full $183.00 price; opus.life/pages/lab-tested shows it crossed out.
  • The longer lines and the price card stay up long enough to read, so the video is now 34.6 seconds (was 28).

Everything else is the same: the lab opening, the orange words, the packs and the music tracks.

Style: Opens in a lab at night; the lab results are on a stadium LED scoreboard with amber dot-matrix digits

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane, NMN-99, SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
35 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Fri 23 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“A Strange Feeling” by Michael Ramir C.
Music (TikTok version)
“bouncy soul” by DesiFreeMusic, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
First frame of S2, the opening slide
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Podium

Style: Sports podium / medal, navy with gold

Product
SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
23 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Wed 21 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“Driving Ambition” by Ahjay Stelino
Music (TikTok version)
“Piano Strings Hope 90 bpm” by LiteSaturation, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (2)
  • About 9 seconds in, the big gold 6 rolls up through 2, 3, 4 and 5 before it lands, so a paused frame can show the wrong number. Idea: let the 6 arrive whole.
  • Idea for the next slideshow, not this video: the opening podium's first-place step is empty and the pack never stands on it. Putting the pack there would mean changing the approved slideshow.
First frame of B2, the opening slide
9 of 21B2Ready for you and Nick to OK

The receipt

Style: Thermal store receipt, monospace type, on dark counter

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
25 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Thu 22 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“Hippidi Hop” by Arulo
Music (TikTok version)
“lofi chill bass hiphop 90 BPM” by beetpro, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (2)
  • About 15.7 seconds in, in the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories): the small "TOTAL" and "BROQ" labels on the last slide pass, half faded, through the top strip that Reels and Stories cover with their own buttons, for about a sixth of a second. Idea: start them a little lower.
  • At the cut to the last frame, the receipt vanishes at once. Idea: a quick fade from one to the next.
First frame of A1, the opening slide
10 of 21A1Ready for you and Nick to OK

Trading cards

Style: Collectible trading cards, holographic foil gradients, stats

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane, NMN-99, SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
25 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Wed 21 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“Alone” by Diego Nava
Music (TikTok version)
“Summertime at 90 bpm” by TopSecretMusicNetwork, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • The cards never get dealt or flipped. At about 3, 7 and 11 seconds each new card just appears face up. Idea: lift the BROQ card out of the opening hand and grow it into slide 2, then flip each next card over like a real trading card.
  • In the first 3 seconds, idea: tilt each card a little as the shine passes over it, the way you'd tilt a real foil card to the light.
  • The foil shimmer is hard to see on a phone. Idea: one brighter shine across each card once it lands.
First frame of B4, the opening slide
11 of 21B4Ready for you and Nick to OK

The route

Style: Transit / subway map, white background, thick coloured line, station dots

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
22 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Tue 20 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“Pop 10” by Grigoriy Nuzhny
Music (TikTok version)
“SDgnjo 'FLOAT AWAY'” by SpirographSounds, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (4)
  • At about 4, 8 and 12 seconds the subway map is thrown away and drawn again. Idea: keep one map the whole way and let the line carry on from stop to stop.
  • On the last slide (about 12 to 16 seconds) the line ends at a stop above the pack. Idea: run a pulse of light along the line into that last stop and flash it as the pack lands.
  • Faint outlines of things that pop in later show in the background just before they appear: the pack on the last slide, and a ring and capsule on slide 2. Idea: hide them until they pop in.
  • In the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories), the lower third of the last frame is mostly plain paper, and the last slide opens on a bare map for about half a second. Idea: move the pack and words down a little, and bring the words in with the map.
First frame of N1, the opening slide
12 of 21N1Ready for you and Nick to OK

Heartbeat

Style: Black, glowing orange EKG line

Product
NMN-99
Length
25 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Thu 22 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“A Memory Of Louis” by Eugenio Mininni
Music (TikTok version)
“Nemeti Tivadar - Clip 8 ( ambiental , relax song , 90 BPM, 24 Biți)” by Nemeti_Tivadar, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • The heartbeat line breaks at every slide change (about 3, 7, 12 and 16 seconds) and starts again from nothing, and the last frame has no line at all. Idea: one unbroken line through the whole video, still running under the pack at the end.
  • In the first second, idea: one brighter flash on the first spike, to give people a reason to keep watching with the sound off.
  • About 3.5 seconds in, "NAD+" fades up. Idea: switch it on with two quick flickers, like a neon sign.
First frame of N6, the opening slide
13 of 21N6Ready for you and Nick to OK

Body map

Style: Warm orange-cream studio, man photo with thin callout lines

Product
NMN-99
Length
27 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Sat 24 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“Sun in Your Eyes” by Alejandro Magaña (A. M.)
Music (TikTok version)
“Feelings (88 BPM) Instrumental” by ThisIsBeatKitchen, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16

There's also a second N6 that uses AI-made video clips. It's not for TikTok, and it goes on Meta only if you want it. Watch it: feeds (4:5), or Reels and Stories (9:16).

Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • About 12 seconds in, "about double" rises in like every other word. Idea: let the word "double" grow from half size to full size, so it does what it says.
  • About 4 seconds in, going from slide 1 to slide 2, the man suddenly gets smaller and shifts over. Idea: move him smoothly, or switch in one clean cut.
  • About 4 and 9 seconds in, "Cellular energy." and "Cellular cleanup." lose the space between the two words for a split second as they pop in. Idea: keep the space fixed.
First frame of N3, the opening slide
14 of 21N3Ready for you and Nick to OK

Battery

Style: Phone battery icons, amber half-empty, green charging

Product
NMN-99
Length
25 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Mon 19 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“Electronic Jazz” by Francisco Alvear
Music (TikTok version)
“Cool Chill Hip Hop Ambience Music | 95 BPM” by royalty_free_music, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (4)
  • About 16 seconds in, our lab-tested NMN amount (1,139.6 mg) gets only a small quick pop. Idea: give it the same bounce and glow as the lightning bolt on slide 4, so the two big moments land the same way.
  • Idea: carry the green charging glow from slide 4 into a soft glow behind the NMN-99 pack on the last slide, so the charge goes into the product.
  • About 6.4 seconds in, the full battery next to "At 25" flashes red for a split second as it fills. Idea: fill it from amber, so red never shows on the healthy one.
  • About 17 to 20 seconds in, a shine sweeps across our lab-tested NMN amount (1,139.6 mg) several times, and each time it briefly makes part of the number harder to read. Idea: run it half as often.
First frame of A2, the opening slide
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Sealed

Style: Lab evidence / tamper-evident seal, red "SEALED" tape, stainless steel

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane, NMN-99, SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
28 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Mon 19 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“Relaxation 03” by Lily J
Music (TikTok version)
“Nature Investigation” by ViraMiller, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • About 16 seconds in, the three packs on slide 5 grow from about 40% of their size, so it reads as a zoom. Idea: have them drop into place instead.
  • About 3.5 to 5 seconds in, the lab report's quote types itself letter by letter, which can look like it's being written in front of you. Idea: show the report already printed and keep the highlighter swipe.
  • About 6 to 13 seconds in, the three cards hold for about 7 seconds with only a light sweep moving. Idea: trim about 1.5 seconds, or add a slow drift.
First frame of N5, the opening slide
16 of 21N5Ready for you and Nick to OK

Three ingredients

Style: Handwritten-style recipe index card on a warm kitchen counter colour

Product
NMN-99
Length
23 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Fri 23 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“I Love You Grandma” by Michael Ramir C.
Music (TikTok version)
“Acoustic Folk Acoustic Guitar” by Pixabay user 33462198, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Question for you

N5 is about NMN-99 having only 3 ingredients. Its last frame, the offer card with "Save 15%", shows two NMN-99 capsules instead of the pack, while the other 20 videos all end on their pack. The capsules match the approved slideshow, whose last slide shows two capsules and no pack. The pack was also left off because it says "1 ingredient" in big type (meaning its one patented ingredient, Uthever), which could look like it contradicts "3 ingredients". Keep the capsules, or show the pack? We'd keep the capsules.

Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • About 11.1 seconds in, for a thirtieth of a second only a faint headline shows on the plain wood. A moment later the ingredient cards slide over each other briefly. Idea: bring the headline and cards in together.
  • The capsules on the last frame have a faint dotted edge, visible only when zoomed in. Idea: smooth the edge.
  • In the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories), the lower part of every slide is empty wood with nothing on it. Idea: move the card down a little to fill it.
First frame of S5, the opening slide
17 of 21S5Ready for you and Nick to OK

The scale

Style: Antique brass scale on pale blue

Product
SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
23 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Thu 22 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“When in Love” by Ahjay Stelino
Music (TikTok version)
“Calm Room Piano 90 bpm” by LiteSaturation, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (2)
  • First 2 seconds: a small pale mark sits under the left pan of the scale. Idea: paint it out.
  • In the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories): the scale sits low, partly behind where Reels shows its caption; the top of the first slide has faint vertical stripes (also in the cover picture shown before the video plays); the picture jumps a little as slide 3 changes to slide 4. Idea: raise the scale and smooth the stripes.
First frame of B5, the opening slide
18 of 21B5Ready for you and Nick to OK

3000 studies

Style: Warm library, tower of papers photo, then warm paper cards

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
25 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Wed 21 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“The Journey” by Ahjay Stelino
Music (TikTok version)
“Piano Strings Inspiring 90 bpm” by LiteSaturation, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (2)
  • In the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories), last frame: faint streaks along the bottom of the background, in the area Reels and Stories cover anyway. Idea: smooth them out.
  • Slide 3 has 40 words in 6.5 seconds, the most of any slide; a viewer may need to pause to read it all. Idea: give that slide a second or two more.
First frame of S4, the opening slide
19 of 21S4Ready for you and Nick to OK

Measuring tape

Style: Bright yellow measuring tape / ruler, bold black numbers

Product
SPMD-99 Spermidine
Length
24 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Sat 24 Oct, 11am
Music (Meta only)
“Masking the Masters” by Eugenio Mininni
Music (TikTok version)
“Cafe (93 bpm, b min)” by tobylane, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • About 8 seconds in, going from slide 2 to slide 3, idea: push in on the tip of the SPMD-99 bar until it becomes slide 3's close-up of the tape, so the lab test reads as taking a closer look.
  • About 8 seconds in, the tape whips across the whole screen. Idea: start it a third of the way in, so it's easier on the eyes.
  • In the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories), last slide: the tape's numbers run off the bottom with "45" cut off, as on the approved slide. Moving the tape up would push the words into the top edge, so we left it.
First frame of B7, the opening slide
20 of 21B7Ready for you and Nick to OK

Postcard

Style: Vintage California postcard, faded film colours, stamp and postmark

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
21 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Sat 24 Oct, 7pm
Music (Meta only)
“Walking in the Park” by Diego Nava
Music (TikTok version)
“Echo Delay Guitar and Melodic Bass Beat - 90 bpm” by TopSecretMusicNetwork, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (3)
  • About 9 seconds in, the "Lot B26204002" postmark stamps across the two stamps. Idea: give it a moment of its own, with a tiny shake or ink spread as it lands.
  • About 3.9 seconds in, the postcard appears blank, with only its stamp, for a moment before its words arrive. Idea: bring the words in with the card.
  • About 17 seconds in, the hills cut straight to the last frame. Idea: a quick fade from one to the next.
First frame of B3, the opening slide
21 of 21B3Ready for you and Nick to OK

Say it right

Style: Dictionary page / phonetics, cream paper, black serif, green accents

Product
BROQ Sulforaphane
Length
23 seconds
Slideshow posts on TikTok
Mon 19 Oct, 3pm
Music (Meta only)
“Secret Garden” by Eugenio Mininni
Music (TikTok version)
“Strings Piano Inspiring 90 bpm” by LiteSaturation, free from Pixabay
Watch 4:5 feeds Watch 9:16 Reels, Stories With music 4:5 feeds With music 9:16 Reels, Stories TikTok version, with music 9:16
Small flaws and ideas from the reviewers (4)
  • Idea: have a real person say "BROQ. It rhymes with rock." over the speaker icon on slide 2. That's new audio, so it's for you and Nick to decide.
  • On slide 2, idea: let the speaker icon's sound waves ripple out once, right as "It rhymes with rock" finishes typing.
  • About 3.3 seconds in, in the 9:16 version (Reels and Stories): the picture jumps slightly down as slide 1 changes to slide 2. Idea: hold the picture still through the change.
  • On the last slide, a very faint outline shows where some words were removed from the background picture. Idea: paint it out.